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Name: Hannibal "Strum" TahLet
Race: Breton and Imperial cross-thing.
Gender: Male
Class: "Ha, what are those!? Sounds dumb, whatever it is."
Birthsign: The Serpent (just because it has no 'Season', and it's ironic). Those born under this sign are the most blessed and the most cursed
D.O.B: Unknown? :u
General Description: "Oh...well. Um. *looks in mirror* I have. Legs. And Hair...and...other things that are normal... Yah... That's what you wanted, right?"
History: (You will get this later. :/ when it's not 5am.)
Personality: (same with this)
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Stats
Health: The normal amount? (100, right?)
Magicka: 5 --- for lighting f
Anatomy - go check out some animal books womun! That *points dramatically to a picture in my gallery* is deffinatly NOT how muscles/tendons/teeth/other looks like in real life/a REAL animal.
Your style could use some work - refine it more.
Poses/Stances - they arn't all that origional/are all the same basically...
Technique - work on learning to use your tools better (light/darkness or shading in a picture using only pencils, or line thickness for emphasis, etc.)
Work on learning how to shade/color/represent different textures. (tree bark, metal, skin, scales, etc), everything looks to smooth/uniform and could use something to mix it up.
Forget art - work on your prose - I dont enjoy reading your written work with your current style...
You know what - just do everything above - it all sounds good/like something to work on. Just do it all, man!
I dont know what you should work on - but it isnt anything in the above answers.
None of the above - I have a better idea! (comments)
Facial Expressions - they arn't very unique or...expressfull for lack of a better word. Their always...snarling or emotionless - fix that why dont you?